Sunday, November 23, 2014

Unit 4- Integrative Assignment- Pachado- Ripamonti



A Book Critique of Academic Writing:
A Handbook for International Students

           
            In the book Academic Writing: A Handbook for International Students, Bailey (2006) presents a complete description of the necessary steps for a successful academic writing and an impressive amount of exercises to develop the writing skills which overseas students need to meet in order to accomplish the standard level of proficiency required by English medium Colleges and Universities. The aim of this paper is to give basic information about this ambitious book such as its structure, style and topics as well as to evaluate its specific aspects which make it readable for the audience, giving an overall recommendation for the reader. 
            As regards the structure of the book, it is divided into four significant parts which are: The writing process, Elements of writing, Accuracy in writing and Writing models, respectively. As the author points out “Academic Writing is divided into four parts. In Parts 1 and 2 the focus is on key writing skills, while Parts 3 and 4 offer revision and reference. Parts 2 and 3 are organized alphabetically for easy access” (Bailey, 2006, p. vii). These parts are also subdivided into different stages which guide the students from initial steps such as note-making and paraphrasing to more complex ones such as organizing paragraphs, rewriting and proof-reading.
            Concerning the topics of this book, the author also provides the students with interesting, useful information such as: how to write arguments, generalizations and references, some skills which they may need when writing academically. As the author explains “The Elements of Writing are the various skills that are needed for most types of academic writing, whether it is a short report, a long essay or a dissertation” (Bailey, 2006, p. 65).
            With reference to the style of the book it is semi-formal, objective, impersonal and precise. The book presents the information clearly and accurately. For example, “Non-native users of English tend to have problems that relate to their mother tongue. Japanese speakers, for example, find it difficult to use articles in English because these are not found in Japanese” and “The components in Accuracy in Writing have been chosen on the basis that they regularly cause difficulty and confusion in students’ writing” (Bailey, 2006, p. 118).

       However, Bailey’s (2006) book would have been more efficient, useful if he had included explanations within the key section, similar to a test-builder book, for the students to enrich their understanding of the error correction process. Particularly remarkable was the limited amount of models that this author included. It would have been better if he had added samples for each format.

            Summing up, it can be affirmed that the author achieves to present academic writing strategies and practice for students who are learning how to write academically in a foreign language in an easy reading and accurate manner. The structure, the style and the relevance of the topics together with the different activities, make this book very readable for the audience and extremely useful for a learner during the first steps in academic writing. From our point of view, this book would be really recommendable to take into account when dealing with academic writing in English if it were supplemented with specific explanations within the error correction process and additional samples of writings.

References

           Bailey, S. (2006). Academic Writing: A handbook for international students (2nd ed.). Taylor & Francis e-library
http://npu.edu.ua/!ebook/book/djvu/A/iif_kgpm_t27.pdf.


Mid-term Test- Pachado


An Academic Summary of a Research Article


            In the article named “A Small-scale Study of Primary School English Language Teacher’s Classrooms Activities and Problems” the author described the situation in Turkey as regards English education in primary classrooms. As the author pointed out “The aim of the present study is to identify the types of English language teaching activities carried out in Turkish primary schools along with the problems they face while teaching” (Arikan, 2011, p. 1). Consequently, a small-scale study based on 46 teachers’ answers to a questionnaire is presented throughout the article.
            At the beginning of the article, the author provided a complete description of English teaching in Turkish primary schools as well as the classroom activities and the teaching materials that are used to facilitate English learning. For example, “Özdemir and Uşun (2009) found that primary school English language teachers (n=95) from Çanakkale considered themselves to be sufficient in using speaking activities, providing pupils with writing activities that can enhance their correct use of English grammar, and using drama and songs” (Arikan, 2011, p. 2).
            Subsequently, the methodology of the study is described by the author. First, a description of the participants involved in it is included. The author explained that “All of the participants were ELT graduates and were under the age of 30” (Arikan, 2011, p. 3). Then, the method that was used to calculate the mean values, standard errors and standard deviations of the results is presented.
            After that, the results obtained during the study are introduced. For example, “Teachers report that filling in the gaps/ blanks (4.13), students reading aloud (4.07), completing grammar exercises (3.93), and children repeating after the teacher (3.83) are the leading activities employed in Turkish EFL classrooms” (Arikan, 2011, p. 4).
            Finally, the conclusions achieved after the study are presented.  One of the conclusions states that some of the teaching materials which are used in Turkish classrooms are not sufficient to achieve English acquisition. The other conclusion has to do with the teaching activities that do not seem to benefit English acquisition either.
           All things considered, Arikan (2011) concluded the article stating that both materials and activities should be updated in future teaching contexts in Turkish, in order to obtain better results as regards English learning in primary school classrooms. 


References

            Arikan, A. (2011). A small-scale Study of Primary School English Language Teacher’s Classrooms Activities and Problems.  International Conference on New Trends in Education and their Implications.


My Personal Vignette

            At the moment I am teaching in a Public Primary School in Cordoba City, in a Program named “Jornada Extendida”. In this program students have classes until noon, they have lunch at school and after that they have English, Arts, Physical Education and Science lessons. 
            I could find myself identified when I read this passage of the article “English language teachers considered themselves to be sufficient in using speaking, grammar, drama and singing activities, but insufficient in using audio materials such as the tape recorder and CD player, using films and computers”.
            I think that I can provide my students different teaching activities in the classroom as well as different teaching materials but the school does not provide students with enough technology in order to practice English in the classrooms.
            As the author, I also believe that both teaching materials and teaching activities should be updated to improve our daily teaching practice to achieve better results in our learners’ development in their English acquisition. 

Unit 3- Integrative Assignment- Pachado- Ripamonti


An Academic Summary of a Research Article


            In the article “Writing for the world: Wikipedia as an introduction to Academic Writing” Tardy (2010) stated “As students move from writing formal academic in English they face several challenges and writing tasks in higher education often require students to draw upon outside sources and to adopt the styles and genres of academic discourse” (p. 12). The purpose of her article is to describe an approach to present the academic literacy skills through an article which was designed for the web-based encyclopedia site, Wikipedia.
            At the beginning of her article, the author provided a general definition about Wikipedia. In this sense, she affirmed “Wikipedia, the online encyclopedia that includes 262 different language editions and over 12 million articles” (Tardy, 2010, p. 13).  She also added a description of its participants and an analysis of the positive and the negative reputation of this online encyclopedia is also included.
            In addition, Tardy (2010) explained that her students were asked to write their own Wikipedia article and that its main aim was to publish them on the website for a worldwide audience. In order to accomplish this goal, they needed to respect several requirements as regards reliability of the sources, length and the final publication.
            Moreover, a specific action plan is presented for the reader to understand how the assignment was performed. The first step was to examine Wikipedia as regards how it works and its content. The second one was to analyze the information according to categories such as events, products or objects and genres which were studied according to the principles of genre-based pedagogy (Hyland, 2007). The third and forth steps were described as outlining, paraphrasing and drafting in order to avoid plagiarism.
            Furthermore, students received feedback from their peers. The following step was to format sources according to the use of in-text citations and footnotes. After that, students focused on proofreading to polish their drafts. Finally, students registered, tried to publish their assignments and the administrators would ask for revision or just accept their writings.

            All in all, Tardy (2010) concluded her article emphasizing the fact that this kind of academic writing presents such a challenge for students that they can explore concepts as drawing on multilingual resources and cultural experiences for a worldwide audience.



References

          Tardy, C. M. (2010). Writing for the world: Wikipedia as an introduction to Academic Writing. English Teaching Forum, 1, pp. 12-19, 27.